(for my border poems)
We can feel
so much rage
in this
voice
but show
don’t tell
This line
where your four
year old speaker leaves
his abuelita
behind
reminds me of
_______
& _______
check them out
Pollero
is a good word
(is Spanish?)
(italics?)
We like the four-by-four
its trunk
we like the desert & your use of
snuck
Is it true
are people really smuggled through
like this
We just don’t buy
that a toddler could really fit
inside
It’s cluttered
unclear
pls show
Suggestions for revision
MORE
abuelita more
flor
y fauna
more
VOICE
less rage
If possible pls show show why
they run
towards what
why would anyone be
trust
We can tell
so much is left
behind
unsaid
We can feel
your searching
your homesick
for your
end